Walk? Why not!
Writen by: Wiwit Melayu
Writen by: Wiwit Melayu
This story is about my own experience when i was in junior high school, grade 3.
When I was in junior high
school, I had an experience that could change my life. The story began when my
father asked me to go to my uncle’s house in Petok. So I decided to go there with my youngest brother and a
friend. From my home to my uncle’s it is about an hour by bus, but before that
we must walk about
20 minutes from my village into downtown. Then we decided to get an Ojek from my home into downtown. At downtown we got a bus into Petok easily.
In Petok, I met with my
uncle and his wife. My uncle invited us to go to his garden to get some
fruits. At the uncle’s garden we played
and put some fruits there. After we played there, we decided to come back to
uncle’s home and got permision to him to come back to my village, because the day was almost
afternoon. Before we went home, my aunty gave some rice and some fruits. So, we
had permitted with my uncle and aunty and took a bus into my village. When we
were waiting for a bus to took us, Suddenly, I felt there was no money on my pocket, my wallet was
lost.
I said loudly “Where is my
wallet? It lost!”
My brother said “Really? How could it be?! So,
what should we do? We did not have
money!”
Surprisingly, my friend
said that we had to walk to get home because we did not
have to get the bus. Then, we decided to walk into my village.
You know, it is about 20 Kilometers. We made a tasked that after two or three
blocks, one of us must brought rice and fruits that have given from my uncle’s
house. So, I decided to bring it first, after two or three blocks, I gave those things to my
brother and so on until we got the home. But my friend, Kamal, when he brought those things, he ate one by one of them
because he could not stand it, he felt thirsty and hungry.
After we walked for 10
kilometers, I saw the time at 3 P.M. But we still had 10 kilometers left to
walk. We were very tired and thirsty. So we decided to eat one by one of the
fruits that given from my uncle. After we ate it, my friend said, “Hey, look at
there, there is so much water, I think it is clean and fresh to drink!”
Then he and my brother
went to the source of water and drunk some water there. While they were
drinking, suddenly it made me very sad and made me cried. I thought that it was my fault, if I did
not lost those money, we must be get home soon. My friend saw me and spoke
loudly, “This is my nicest trip in my life, this is our story. I will never forget this day,
March 15 2009, is not it? I love this trip, so why you must be cry? Just enjoy
it and fell it that we are having a pramuka’s
trip!”
When i
heard those words, I felt much better and my spirit come out. After we
took a rest for a while, we continued our journey. It almost closed from my
village, I heard that Mu’adzin had
spoke up the adzan magrib, but we
still at Sungai Pindahan village, it
is about 6 or 7 kilometers from my house. We still went on and spirit to
continue it until we got home. After we got Pasar
Dalik, we took a rest for while and the time was at 8 P.M. While we taking
a rest at a bridge, I saw a car that I thought, “I must be know this car”. That
car belongs to my friend, then I stopped that car and say, “Bang, may I join
with you to get home?”
He said, “Of course, but
where have you been? You look so tired”
“Jalan-jalan
paniang bang!” I Said.
Finally, I got home and I
saw the time it was about at 9 P.M. When I met my father, he was very surprised
because we looked so tired and down. After I got took a bath, I told about my
journey from Petok until we got home.
He was very surprised of it and said that he will never asked me to go to my
uncle’s house anymore and I said, “It does not matter yah. I felt tired, thirsty and hungry, but in fact, this journey
makes me realize that this is the real life. I have grown up now, thank you for
give me this lesson, I love this journey!”
"We made a tasked that after two or three blocks"
BalasHapuswhat do you mean by blocks? how far it is in measurement of kilometers or meters?
I mean one of us had to take turns to bring those things (rice and fruits)
HapusWe walked about 20 km.
Thank you for comment my brade.. :).
that's a nice story wiwid..
BalasHapusi think it will be better if you make such kind of a note at the end of your story the meaning about "jalan2 paniang bang", "ojek"
keep fighting :)
Thanks a lot yuri..
HapusOke,, i'll make it for the next sroty.. :)
what??? Are you kidding me? 20 km? what a great walker,, hehehe I like your story.. Keep on water... (wahahaha)
BalasHapusI'm serious Siti...
HapusThank you.. :)
20 km ? i believe you have some muscles there...zehahahaha
BalasHapusinteresting story by the way...
Hahahaha...
Hapusthat's why everyone call me "Muscular".. :'(
:p
Thank you ozi.. :)
20 km???
BalasHapusare you still alive wiwit??? O_o
but, I like your story
keep fighting thor!!! ^^
Hahahaha..
HapusI'm alive.... I'm alive.. :D
Thank you.. :)
it's a nice story of you,Wiwit,, hahaha :)
BalasHapusI could believe that you walked 20km because you are........,,,, hahahaa,, I don't to tell it coz you must know what I think,,, ;)
Hahaha.. thank you Aling..
HapusHahahaha.. i know it so well.. :p
20 km Wiwit! Wow, I cannot believe it, but it is a fact. It sounds that you used to be a great walker. hahaha :D
BalasHapusOverall, I enjoy reading your story.
Yeah ridha.. it was my unforgettable experience.. :)
HapusThank you Ridha.. :)
witt, that's amazing experience:)
BalasHapuswalking in 20 km??
can i walk with you ?? hahaha
hahahaha 20km??? that was crazy! overall I like your story. be careful in your grammar and punctuation :)
BalasHapushahahaha you are so brave wit. you can walk as long 20 km. I just want to say, pay attention the punctuation wit
BalasHapusthis is a good narrative story!!
BalasHapushahaha.. that's very funny story bacause I can't emaging your face at that time,, :D
BalasHapusI like Wiwit,, :)
woww 20 km??/ new record hahahaaa
BalasHapusby the way.. it is nice story...
i'm not surprised that you can walk 20km Wit :D
BalasHapusgyahaha :v
btw, nice story^^
keep fighting^^