Sabtu, 14 September 2013


Walk? Why not!
Writen by: Wiwit Melayu

This story is about my own experience when i was in junior high school, grade 3. 
When I was in junior high school, I had an experience that could change my life. The story began when my father asked me to go to my uncle’s house in Petok. So I decided to go there with my youngest brother and a friend. From my home to my uncle’s it is about an hour by bus, but before that we must walabout 20 minutes from my village into downtown. Then we decided to get an Ojek from my home into downtown. At downtown we got a bus into Petok easily.
In Petok, I met with my uncle and his wife. My uncle invited us to go to his garden to get some fruits.  At the uncle’s garden we played and put some fruits there. After we played there, we decided to come back to uncle’s home and got permision to him to come back to my village, because the day was almost afternoon. Before we went home, my aunty gave some rice and some fruits. So, we had permitted with my uncle and aunty and took a bus into my village. When we were waiting for a bus to took us, Suddenly, I felt there was no money on my pocket, my wallet was lost.
I said loudly “Where is my wallet? It lost!”
My brother said “Really? How could it be?! So, what should we do? We did not have money!”
Surprisingly, my friend said that we had to walk to get home because we did not have to get the bus. Then, we decided to walk into my village. You know, it is about 20 Kilometers. We made a tasked that after two or three blocks, one of us must brought rice and fruits that have given from my uncle’s house. So, I decided to bring it first, after two or three blocks, I gave those things to my brother and so on until we got the home. But my friend, Kamal, when he brought those things, he ate one by one of them because he could not stand it, he felt thirsty and hungry.
After we walked for 10 kilometers, I saw the time at 3 P.M. But we still had 10 kilometers left to walk. We were very tired and thirsty. So we decided to eat one by one of the fruits that given from my uncle. After we ate it, my friend said, “Hey, look at there, there is so much water, I think it is clean and fresh to drink!”
Then he and my brother went to the source of water and drunk some water there. While they were drinking, suddenly it made me very sad and made me cried. I thought that it was my fault, if I did not lost those money, we must be get home soon. My friend saw me and spoke loudly, “This is my nicest trip in my life, this is our story. I will never forget this day, March 15 2009, is not it? I love this trip, so why you must be cry? Just enjoy it and fell it that we are having a pramuka’s trip!”

When i heard those words, I felt much better and my spirit come out. After we took a rest for a while, we continued our journey. It almost closed from my village, I heard that Mu’adzin had spoke up the adzan magrib, but we still at Sungai Pindahan village, it is about 6 or 7 kilometers from my house. We still went on and spirit to continue it until we got home. After we got Pasar Dalik, we took a rest for while and the time was at 8 P.M. While we taking a rest at a bridge, I saw a car that I thought, “I must be know this car”. That car belongs to my friend, then I stopped that car and say, “Bang, may I join with you to get home?”
He said, “Of course, but where have you been? You look so tired”
 “Jalan-jalan paniang bang!” I Said.
Finally, I got home and I saw the time it was about at 9 P.M. When I met my father, he was very surprised because we looked so tired and down. After I got took a bath, I told about my journey from Petok until we got home. He was very surprised of it and said that he will never asked me to go to my uncle’s house anymore and I said, “It does not matter yah. I felt tired, thirsty and hungry, but in fact, this journey makes me realize that this is the real life. I have grown up now, thank you for give me this lesson, I love this journey!”

21 komentar:

  1. "We made a tasked that after two or three blocks"

    what do you mean by blocks? how far it is in measurement of kilometers or meters?

    BalasHapus
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    1. I mean one of us had to take turns to bring those things (rice and fruits)
      We walked about 20 km.
      Thank you for comment my brade.. :).

      Hapus
  2. that's a nice story wiwid..
    i think it will be better if you make such kind of a note at the end of your story the meaning about "jalan2 paniang bang", "ojek"
    keep fighting :)

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. Thanks a lot yuri..
      Oke,, i'll make it for the next sroty.. :)

      Hapus
  3. what??? Are you kidding me? 20 km? what a great walker,, hehehe I like your story.. Keep on water... (wahahaha)

    BalasHapus
  4. 20 km ? i believe you have some muscles there...zehahahaha
    interesting story by the way...

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. Hahahaha...
      that's why everyone call me "Muscular".. :'(
      :p
      Thank you ozi.. :)

      Hapus
  5. 20 km???
    are you still alive wiwit??? O_o
    but, I like your story
    keep fighting thor!!! ^^

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. Hahahaha..
      I'm alive.... I'm alive.. :D
      Thank you.. :)

      Hapus
  6. it's a nice story of you,Wiwit,, hahaha :)
    I could believe that you walked 20km because you are........,,,, hahahaa,, I don't to tell it coz you must know what I think,,, ;)

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. Hahaha.. thank you Aling..
      Hahahaha.. i know it so well.. :p

      Hapus
  7. 20 km Wiwit! Wow, I cannot believe it, but it is a fact. It sounds that you used to be a great walker. hahaha :D
    Overall, I enjoy reading your story.

    BalasHapus
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    1. Yeah ridha.. it was my unforgettable experience.. :)
      Thank you Ridha.. :)

      Hapus
  8. witt, that's amazing experience:)
    walking in 20 km??
    can i walk with you ?? hahaha

    BalasHapus
  9. hahahaha 20km??? that was crazy! overall I like your story. be careful in your grammar and punctuation :)

    BalasHapus
  10. hahahaha you are so brave wit. you can walk as long 20 km. I just want to say, pay attention the punctuation wit

    BalasHapus
  11. this is a good narrative story!!

    BalasHapus
  12. hahaha.. that's very funny story bacause I can't emaging your face at that time,, :D
    I like Wiwit,, :)

    BalasHapus
  13. woww 20 km??/ new record hahahaaa
    by the way.. it is nice story...

    BalasHapus
  14. i'm not surprised that you can walk 20km Wit :D
    gyahaha :v

    btw, nice story^^
    keep fighting^^

    BalasHapus