Rabu, 30 Oktober 2013
Kamis, 10 Oktober 2013
Review Text 2: Poem Review
Shiny Tale
By YUKI
We begin playing as an orchestra our dream of journeying, and flip to the first page
I have found something that sparkles even more than any treasure
When I turn around and look, your silly-looking smiling faces give me the boost to go as far as I want |
The tale we once wrote in this small room
will be the prologue to the novel we're currently writing |
With a speed fast enough for us to almost reach the vast sky,
we have been running with our hands off the ship's wheel We begin playing as an orchestra our dream of journeying, and flip to the next page |
No matter what difficulties we may face, be it a storm or a black rain,
we will ride on the tailwind and wait in a place no one else anywhere will be able to reach |
The tale we are writing in this vast sea
begins filling up our blank map |
We sail towards a sea of endless dreams, not knowing whether we'll find light or darkness
On a sea where even the light is pitch black, there will always be wind
There's hope visible in a still hidden location, as well as countless sorrows
This is our one and only journey, so we begin looking for the next pages
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This
poem is one the anime soundtrack “Daily Live of high School Boys”. This poem
has a great significance and is quite difficult to be understood. The selection
of words that used by Yuki in this poem a little bit complicated and poetic. I absolutely
love every meaning that contains in this poem which is tell about the story of
friendship.
However,
in my opinion, Yuki did not merely write about a friendship, but also about the
expectation and goals. “Begin playing as an orchestra our dream of journeying,
and flip to the first page” here represents a trip to get the succesful and
also the expectations that will be achieved. “I have found something that
sparkles ven more than any treasure” represents to something that make Yuki
believes that there is a great tresure that more than anything else, a
friendship.
This
poem also tells about the memories that Yuki did in the past with his friends.
“The tale we once wrote in this smaal room, will be the prologue to the novel
we are currently writing” represents to the memorable time that Yuki spend with
his friends and it will be a nice memory for him and will be kept it in his
mind.
By
writing these words, “No matter what difficulties we may face, be it a storm or
black rain, we will ride on the tailwind” Yuki might want to show to his
friends that although they have a different faith from others, we have to
struggle to get happiness together and begin to reach the journey of life,
because life is only once and we only have one opportunity to get our goal and
to be success.
Project 3: Review Text
Title :
The Sister’s Keeper
Directed by : Jonathan McGarry
Duration of film : 1 hour 49
minutes
Genre : Drama
movie
Year of released :
June 26, 2009
Distributed by :
New Line Cinema
Country :
United States
Language :
English
I absolutely love this
movie. This is a drama film about a little girl who requires her mother to get
a medical independence named
Anna Fitzgerald. She has
a sister, named
Kate Fitzgerald who is
a patient of acute leukemia. During her life Kate always having surgery
donation that given by her sister, Anna, to keep Kate’s life.
In
the beginning of this story tells about how Anna survives her sister’s life
without taking the part of her body. In this story also tells about how Anna
survives her life by requiring her mother because her mother has took her body
since she was a baby. However, if she would not take her body, probably her
sister will die, because only Anna that can help Kate’s life. This is a very
sadness moment that I watched and I have to say “I cried”.
In
the middle of this story tells about Kate get along with Taylor (one of
patients of leukemia). Kate and Taylor become a couple and spend their time together.
This moment makes Kate become more spirit and her self confidence become huge
to survive her life. Unfortunately, they cannot get along for a long time
because Taylor dies. This accident makes Kate become falling down and tries to
suicide. Not for a long time later, Kate finally died. The ending of this
story, finally Anna gets what she wants, a medical independence and life
happily with her family ever after.
This
movie definitely shows us how Anna and Kate survive their life. Anna is a
little girl that must give her body to her sister. However Kate is a sister
that must get Anna’s body to survive. This movie also shows us how a family is
very important in our life, how Kate’s mother struggle for Kate’s life. From
this movie I have learned that life is a choice to be happy, even if it means
to sacrifice for those we love. Sacrifice does not mean we give everything that
we have. It also teaches us how to be a sincere person.
Experience Writing 2
My Memorable Experience When
Studied Writing 2
August 28th, 2013 was my first
meeting in writing 2 with Mrs. Leni Marlina. At that time, I never knew what Mrs.
Lina looked like. I just heard her name from my lecturer in reading 1, Mr.
Zainil. He told us that Mrs. Lina was one of his clever student and at that
time Mrs. Lina was in Australia to have her magister program. Since I was taught
by Mrs. Lina, I have learned many things from her, such as how to manage the
time, assignments and how to make my best writing project in writing 2.
First, when we are talking about the time
that I had spent while studying writing 2. I think, it is the most incredible
time for this semester. Why I say like that? because, as I remember we had a
class more than 16 sessions until now. I still remember when the first meeting
on August 28th, 2013, Mrs. Lina asked us to have a class on every
Saturday morning until the afternoon for a month, because she would take time
off to give birth. Actually, it made me little bit upset me because if I had a
class on Saturday, it means that I could not go to my hometown for this month
so that I had to spend much money this month.
Second thing is about the assignments that Mrs.
Lina gave to us. Truly, I only focus with this material, writing 2, because the
lecturer gave another task before the task that she had gave before was done.
So that make me little bit confused, what I should do first, meanwhile another
tasks were waiting for me. Besides, we also had to give some comments to other
writing projects and corrected my friends’ writing. By correcting others’
writing project, I got more idea how to make a good essay and also grammatical
rules in academic writing. In addition, we also had to write our writing
projects on a blog, so that I had to make a blog and had been published my writing projects on it.
During this whole semester, I had learned
three writing projects which are the narrative text, discussion text and review
text. From the three writing projects that had been written, I think my best
writing project is the discussion text because it had passed for several steps
that made this material be the best one. The title of my discussion text is
“Should the Event of Miss World be Held in Indonesia?” At that time, it was a
hot issue in Indonesia, so that I chose this title as my writing in second
writing project. I began to make an outline and searched on the internet some
issues to support it. After I finished my first outline, I asked my friends to
corrected it and it continued until three steps; revision 1, 2 and 3. After I
finished into revision three, I thought it was the best one that I had done
because all of the suggestions that my friends gave were very acceptable and
supported my writing to be the best one.
In conclusion, studied writing 2 with Ms.
Line is one of the best memorable subject that I got this semester, because
many things that I have learned while studying writing 2. For instance, I
learned to be independent person and manageable the schedule that I had got. I
also learned to be more responsible of what I have done. Before I studied
writing 2 with Mrs. Lina, I used to make something without putting the sources.
Overall, this is an predictable experience.
Jumat, 04 Oktober 2013
Memories in Writing 1 and My Expectations in Writing 2
Many people said that studies writing is
the most difficult thing in English, because we have to know about the
grammatical rules and get many vocab on it. Beside that we have to have a
background knowledge to make a good paragraph becomes more interesting and
persuade. In case, I ever had this situation when i studied writing in the last
semester. It was the most difficult thing that i got when i studied in the last
semester.
First of all, it is about the lecturer that tough us when I studied
writing 1 in the last semester. When i studied writing 1, we studied with Mr.
Saunir and Mr. Hafidz. For the first meeting with Mr. Saunir, it made me little
bit scare, because he was little bit scary. He was very discipline and looks
unfriendly. When we studied with Mr. Saunir, we must be on time and cooperated
in the class. We have to made a presentation every week and show it up in front
of the class. During the whole semester i studied writing 1 with Mr. Saunir, he
was very different with what i have thought before. He was very kind and
friendly. I like his style to gave lessons to us, he also shared to us about
his own experience in his life. Different from Mr. Saunir, Mr. Hafidz gave the
lessons with one way. He made a presentation on Microsoft PowerPoint and explained
to us about the material. Actually, it was little bit boring. Truly, i
usually felt sleepy until the class was over.
Second, it is about the material
that we got in writing 1. When we studied writing 1 in the last semester we
have got many materials from the lecturers. We have learned about how to make a
good paragraph that had related for each paragraph, the basic skill of writing
skill. When I made a presentation in front of the class, I made many mistakes
on my writing, about the grammar, develop of my writing. I think it was very
embarrassing when I presented my writing in front of the class because I got
many mistakes on my writing. I still remember when Mr. Saunir said that my
writing was very simple and there was have no related of each paragraph. During
that time, I am always trying to make notes on my book with English to improve
my English, especially on writing.
The last one is about the
examination. I still remember when the final examination on third building, I
was very confused to made an essay. The most difficult thing is about mind, it
was very hurting my mind to thought what I was going to write? So when the time
was over, I had not done yet. I still writing on my paper and still trying to
get some ideas on it. It was very hurtful and made me little bit disappointed
because I thought "How stupid I am!" I could not imagine if the
lecturer refused my paper. I must be got a bad mark in writing section.
Fortunately, I got a good mark, but it was not good enough. So I have to have more
spirit and keep on fighting to get new lessons in this semester.
During this whole semester, I
hope my writing will be better than last semester. I hope I can be more
creative to tell or share something on my writing. The lecturer will be
friendly to make the class more interesting. Also I hope this semester I can
improve my writing and increase the skill of writing.
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